Unfaithful

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    Unfaithful

    If you loved me, then you wouldn't have

    given yourself so equally to another.

    Your lustful kisses upon her repulse my

    manners of respect for you.

    I trusted in your words, lived upon your

    kindness.

    I'm a woman of sacredness and prosperity;

    "How could you have done that to me?"

    Forgiveness takes time but remembering is

    remorseful.

    My heart is wounded by your infidelity.

    My "love you's" are hesitant.

    I live with your selfish act as if it

    was my own.

    Love is never to have to say you are sorry.

    Then, "Why I am apologizing for your

    carelessness?"

    Maybe I feel sorry for you and hate myself

    for loving you and your unfaithfulness.

     

     

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    SavVySam commented on Unfaithful

    04-18-2010

    Though you've penned in pain gentleness of spirit still wafts from your words..."Forgiveness takes time but remembering is remorseful." Indeed! Good job!;)
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    Marmorl73

    04/19/2010

    Thanks! :-)

    Qualin commented on Unfaithful

    04-16-2010

    THERE IS A VERY THIN LINE BETWEEN LOVE AND HATREDYOU GO TO BED IN FERVERANT LOVE AND WAKE UP WITH THE SAME PASSION OF HATE WELL DELIVERED AND SADLY AN EVERYDAY EXPERIANCE THAT IS GROWING OUT OF CONTROLL"IF WE WOULD ONLY GO BACK TO GOD ", WE HAD BETTER AS THEY SAY WE,"AN'T SEEN NUTTIN YET'!!!!VERY GOOD WRITE...QUALIN
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    Marmorl73

    04/16/2010

    Thanks for your comment! I so agree with you!

    BikemanRJ commented on Unfaithful

    04-14-2010

    A very sad and emotional poem but if this person truly loves you and only you they would never cheat on you forgiving the person that is right but the act sometimes we must judge and condemn. There are many fish in the sea of love sometimes you just need to sit back and cast your net on the other side of the boat and then wait to see what happens. God Bless Randy
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    Marmorl73

    04/15/2010

    You are so right. Thanks for your comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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