unfinished crow ?

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    unfinished crow ?

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    i hold no soul expendable
    like me, my friends are bendable

                  still
    i am that bird on a wire
    so alone i fly and flow
    out of the tree
    and murder free

    this black crow.





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    cheronld commented on unfinished crow ?

    06-20-2012

    Pacing a wallop - To provide a burst of energy, power, or excitement with the least amount of force....That my friend is your work in a nutshell....great write....Cher

    Crush

    06/20/2012

    i love how you express appreciation for my work. sometimes i wonder if we are reading the same poem. lol. seriously, though, i do appreciate your time.

    cheronld

    06/20/2012

    Lol...."sometimes i wonder if we are reading the same poem"....I get what you mean and you are not the first to say it....But....that is the beauty of words....that is the beauty of Poetry....So color me GUILTY.....my mind is a terrible place to waste...and....at times....a terrible place to live....in the words of the Iconic "Popeye"....I yam what I yam...and that's all that I yam...I'm Cher the undefined one....*smile*

    Crush

    06/20/2012

    don't change a THING, Cher !!!

    slimgoodwoody commented on unfinished crow ?

    06-09-2012

    As usual you put so much into your writing that it shows, even in just a few lines. A fan, indeed, am I.

    Phission

    06/09/2012

    wow ! and thank you so much for taking the time, slim. i really appreciate it. will read your words soon.

    BreeLove commented on unfinished crow ?

    06-08-2012

    I’m not exactly sure why; but this piece made me cry. You always touch a part of my soul with your words. A part of me feels your uncertainty, your trepidation, your loneliness, and also your freedom at the same time.But know you’re not in this alone, even if it’s just in spirit! Blessings to you my Dear friend, Love u Bree

    Crush

    07/10/2012

    Thank you, Bree. See you in November !

    tierra7 commented on unfinished crow ?

    06-05-2012

    Brilliant piece, very well expressied in a few words!!! food for thought!! Love & Light, Tierra

    Crush

    06/05/2012

    thank you, tierra. i will try to get to your site and submit. thank you for your time.

    Kingwebstar commented on unfinished crow ?

    05-31-2012

    Short but well written excellent job.I encourage you to continue to write.You have my support. Love Da KinG

    Crush

    06/01/2012

    thank you, kind sir.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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