UNFINISHED

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    UNFINISHED

                 UNFINISHED

     

    I’m unfinished

    Trying to complete what’s undone

    But my sins find me with out retreat

    I’m unfinished, unfinished

    Half of me is gone

     

    Do my sin’s block your ears from hearing my plea

    Is my heart not felt by your love as my sin fills my tears

    Do you not hear,  can you not feel,  is this according to your word?

     I’m unfinished

    Trying to complete what’s unfinished

    But my sins find me with out retreat

    With my actions and in deeds, my struggles go unseen

    On my way to you is my time wasted or doomed?

     Lord you hear, but not my pleas

    dealing with my sins ongoing plight inme

    Human that I am sin will never end

     I’m unfinished

    Trying to complete what’s unfinished

    But my sins find me with out retreat

     

    When will you listen when will you hear

    If you will not answer me were do I go from here ?

    For my sin dwells with in me, I fight it every day

    Battles are small and large won and lost in my mind

    With out a savior to hear me, to see my loss

    My sins will flood me

    I will fall again

                                                                                                                                                

    I’m unfinished, unfinished

    Half of me is gone

                             So unfinished, unfinished                                        

    With you gone!

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    icu2 commented on UNFINISHED

    01-13-2010

    This is amazing. I wish I had the answers. You really make the reader feel your angst. Well done, poet. A.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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