Unfit love

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    Unfit love

    Cut the cord of this unfit love
    and tie off its supply of blood,
    nothings left except pain and hurt
    and the tears that to often flood.

    Torn by words that can't be taken back
    each little syllable spoken,
    made to choke out loves intent
    this marriage is hells token.

    I did my best to makes things right
    forgave until it hurt,
    still it seems I could not do enough
    to please this fuckin jerk.

    Forgive me of my distain, for I speak
    with a wicked force,
    but I have suffered long enough
    it is now time for a divorce.

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    Cielo commented on Unfit love

    06-28-2009

    "Cut the chord" is a powerful start, and the little things "syllables" do matter. Excellent expression.
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    randomthoughts commented on Unfit love

    06-27-2009

    good ....... plus a laugh ...................................................................... ..............................................**** (: ***** :)............................................
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    majgirl56 commented on Unfit love

    06-27-2009

    it is a very emotional poem you have been hurt I guess we all express what we feel in words sometimes love blinds reality of what is the truth.
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    pumaheart commented on Unfit love

    06-26-2009

    Your poetry is very powerful. Whenever something you write inspires someone else then you know you have the gift. It's amazing the effect you had on FLAWLES. Keep writing, you'll get there.
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    FLAWLES commented on Unfit love

    06-26-2009

    Very good pg. It's hard to tell if this is fiction or reality. At any rate, assuming it's fiction and I was that man, go to my page and read "Baby I'm SORRY!"; and this is how I'd, try to make you understand.
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