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    my thoughts are full of you
    you control everything i do
    you take over my mind
    but you i still cant find

    you reject me in every way
    makes me fight harder every day
    its what i cant hold
    that makes me feel so cold

    clouded in misery
    of the day i left you behind
    the day i chose someone else
    but i cant get you off my mind!

    you control my every move
    everything i do is related to you
    no matter how hard i try
    your memory still makes me cry

    your love holds on to me
    and it just wont let go
    why cant i just see
    what you already know?

    you said you were done with me
    no more playing games
    all your cards were dealt
    you cant even say my name

    but cant you just see
    that i love you still
    the day i left you
    myself i wanted to kill

    it just seemed like the right thing to do
    that it would set me free
    but it only bound me closer
    to the love i can no longer see

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    WhiteKnight commented on unforgetable


    its a really good poem im just concerned why it w as written. is everything OK? you know im here if you need someone to listen Prince

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    SunnyRain’s Poems (30)

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    I'll Forever Miss You 0
    On My Own 1
    Shooting Star 1
    so far apart 3
    mine 2
    the little things 1
    There for you 1
    waiting 1
    change 1
    unforgetable 1
    now my life is through 2
    if there isnt any rain 2
    Again 1
    The forgotten love 1
    Just him 2
    just one second 0
    Dreamimg 2
    man made 1
    Yesterday 0
    Forever 0
    take a look at me now 2
    the truth i cant deny 0
    no more him 0
    a place to go 0
    out of my reach 0
    love in any laguage 0
    I'm Dying 0
    Unspoken Love 1
    Every Day 1
    Believe 2