Unforgetable Times


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This poem is about a recent terrible heartbreak I went through. This is the beginning of my closure. :)

Unforgetable Times

I heard your voice
It didn't sound the same
It's haunting me
Keeping me awake
You listened to me cry
For the first and last time
Now I'm standing lost
Which way is right?

Our plans are gone
And replaced with air
You never loved me
And you still don't care
Your ways don't match up
With my heart that flies
Just like Heaven above
Sees beyond the night

I don't hear from you
These darkening days
Because with a kiss to her
You tossed me away
So you'll see me tonight
I'll be showing the signs
Then you'll watch me forget
Unforgetable times

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Helios commented on Unforgetable Times


Your poems tract the "stages" and the lessons of growing up [which can be painful at times]. If only we can all write the struggles of the years away... A charming little piece.

thecross commented on Unforgetable Times


and the book begins to shut hopefully with a loud slam for emphasis good write

WriterGenevieve commented on Unforgetable Times


Very nice poem and the ending is perfect! Beautiful!!!

edgarApoe10 commented on Unforgetable Times


I completely understand how you feel...Im sure all teenage girls our age have had unforgettable times like that... Very good poem, had a very nice flow. Keep up the good work!

stever commented on Unforgetable Times


very nice write and yes i know the feeling read some of mine you'll see...StEvEr

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Unforgetable Times 9
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The Angels Song 5
Bring on the Rain 3
Changed 5
I Believe 5
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Mine 4
I Love You, Too 3
Your Litte Girl 3