UNFORGIVEN

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    UNFORGIVEN

    Quarter  is not 2 dimes and a nickel 

    She`s more like 2 kids and a pickle

     

    Darkened, hellish, and rebellish

    Some think  she`s pickle relish

     

    Oh I`m sure she taste good

    But let`s not get in the eating mood

     

    She smokes, she tokes

    She drinks , she thinks

     

    She is almost a stranger

    Not born in a manger

     

    Music, TV , and friends

    Some seem set in their ways

    But I think she could bend

    What may come is not always fun

    Will she be forgiven ?

     

    Tomorrow is to far away

    Where is my candy bar

     

    I`m not your mister so don’t

    Give my mind a blister

     

    Different strokes for different  folks

    Your ways are so different from mine

     

    I hope you will be fine

    I want the best for you

     

    I love you too and dearly

    I just hope you see it clearly

     

                          By: Rich Severson--2009


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    Krystle commented on UNFORGIVEN

    01-25-2011

    Awesome great job!! liked this alot! look forward to reading more of your work:)
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    cadence commented on UNFORGIVEN

    10-19-2010

    nice poetry..all over the place...but very emotional.
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    Tempestlady commented on UNFORGIVEN

    07-18-2009

    Oretty good. Kinda sing song. Like the message, and the flow. Easy to follow, and not too long. Good write......
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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