unhappiest moment

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    This is a poem I just thought of.

    unhappiest moment

        A long time ago when I was four
              I heard a loud knocking on the door
              I answered and looked quite dismayed 
              Couse there on the floor my brother laid


               My mother cooed and my father awed
               As that baby cried and sqwaaed
                I told my mom to send It away
                 But despite complaints my brother stayed
                

                  I got to like the little guy
                  Until the day they asked if I
                     Would let them have another

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    Dancer022597 commented on unhappiest moment

    01-23-2010

    Lol i know how u feel, ive got a lil sis and she drives me up a wall! great job and funny work!
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    jharrison

    01/30/2010

    ty!

    vava2360 commented on unhappiest moment

    01-20-2010

    it's wonderful. i can't really say i can relate to it because im the youngest. But overall, it was an outstanding poem. Great imagery and use of words.
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    jharrison

    01/20/2010

    Thanks

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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