UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


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An erotic nightmare ? The Beginning .... Please also enjoy Unholy Union - Part II - The Wedding

UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning

It was a dark and evil October night ...
I remember it all to well.
The memory lies - still fresh in my mind,
My personal journey to Hell.

I lay warm and comfortable in my bed ...
As she lay naked by my side.
She was a vision of beauty to behold, 
In the rays of the bright moonlight.

When an odd feeling just flooded over me ...
Felt like a battle had been lost?
Something wasn't right - Something felt so wrong,
Couldn't get it out of my thoughts.

What had happened to me just moments before? ...
Can't shake this feeling of dread.
Her insatiable lust, unquenchable thirst,
Left a pounding in my head.

Sights of naked flesh had  filled my mind ...
Left me questioning my soul.
The intermingling of our passionate screams,
Had taken complete control.

The aroma of sex permeated the air ...
Blood-letting was part of the game.
And she licked each drop - like it was her last,
Savoring the taste of the pain.

She screamed and howled like a bitch in heat ...
with every orgasmic thrust.
She would've taken more  - All I had to give,
Knew it would never be enough.

She had taken my soul to hell and back ...
This sweet succubus of sin.
With her kiss of death and undying desire,
She sealed our unholy union.




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JadedJezzabel commented on UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


this is kinda sexy in a very dark and deviant way.......loved the build up.



Hey JJ! :) Thanks for the read and comments .. I appreciate it. :) Ya ... Part one and Part two are both a little twisted. lol! :) Thanks again! :) Ken

Bobbie876 commented on UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


i like it...looooove part two though. Sights of naked flesh had filled my mind ... Left me questioning my soul. The intermingling of our passionate screams, Had taken complete control. She screamed and howled like a bitch in heat ... with every orgasmic thrust. She would've taken more - All I had to give, Knew it would never be enough. ( I CAN RELATE :)))



Thanks again Bobbie! Glad ya like it .. I think this will become a trilogy .. I feel that it's still not quite finished .. Anyway, thanks again my friend for al the reads and comments .. Much appreciated! :) Ken

Teardrops commented on UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


I really dont know how i missed this one Ken i guess its was before my knight period but its worth the wait to find it now you are awsome , talented and just damed great. I love the pictures this brings to mind it would make a great painting . thanks Marie



Thank you Marie - I really appreciate it. I noticed you read part 2 first :) Figured eventually you'd get around to part 1 :) I think I'm gonna make it a trilogy - it really needs a more deserving ending. Anway ... Thanks for the great comments my friend ~ much appreciated! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


again loved this write. a fabulous twist of dark sexual eroticism. well written.



Thanks Angel! Dark and twisted is right! lol! Don't ask me where this came from? I have no idea .. I guess it came from the "Beats The Hellout Out Of Me Zone!" :) Thanks again! Ken

Fallenangel87 commented on UNHOLY UNION ~ The Beginning


SO INSANELY HOT .. What else is there to say.. Damn, Great write definite 10 from me ... -fallenangel87-



Thanks Fallen- I appreciate your sentiments and the 10! :) Ken

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