UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

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I wrote this in 2001 shortly after the tragic event that will live in our hearts and our children's children's hearts - This is what it is, a tribute, maybe not all that good in articulation and grammatics... perhaps lacking artistic form. It matters not, for it is from my heart in memories of all the lives that were lost and the united strength we gained as a nation!  Thank you for reading.

UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

 

Here with my wife by my side and my child in her arms I stare out looking at what no longer stands; what once reached to the sky to heights where eagles soar on high.

Buildings have fallen and lives were taken but the united strength of our country will not allow all that was lost to bring down the liberty of freedom..

The costly misfortunes cannot be repaid, but from sacred ground America will rise up.

 

As I wipe away a tear I somehow feel the sorrow in the hearts of the people all around. 

Quietly I send out a plea for no one to look away.

Look up, gaze at angels that have gone from the planes they flew upon - to new homes in the clouds that reflect light on the lives left on earth.

Bow in silent prayer, but don’t close your eyes, open them wide.

See that apart we have walked further from day to day, and now that the nation has been brought closer together, we must help one another so that closer we stay.

 

My silence and solace is broken when these words are spoken. 

My daughter asks “why daddy why”? 

But no matter how hard I try to console my sweet baby girl, urging her not to cry, she doesn’t seem to hear me.

Then somewhat distantly I hear her say “daddy you promised never to go away”!

So regretfully and tenderly I place a kiss upon her soft wet cheek.

With the spirit of my love I hug my wife and whisper, “when you see the stars in the heavens and the stars of our great flag waving in the wind with pride - there I’ll be”.

I will always be right by your side. Remember me.

Don’t give up, and remember all the heroes that have unselfishly and sometimes unknowingly given their lives for everyone to remain free.

At this time I must say, with moistened eyes (yes heavenly souls can cry), it’s just for a little while; goodbye…

 

Love Thy Neighbors, Love Thyself, and Help Others To Love One Another.  

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Marsink commented on UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

01-22-2010

Your heartfelt compassion for the strangers and the love for your family is shouting from the pinnacle of this wonderful inspiring eulogy. Thanks for sharing a common but centrally precious conviction of those who love America and it's people.

Artie commented on UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

12-07-2009

Very well done. An amazing tribute, and a truly moving time capsule of a day we will never forget. 10 from me

soulwriter

12/07/2009

I'm honored that you read and shared your thoughts.

inkmaster commented on UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

12-05-2009

This is the truth a day that will always make me rage at what happened..If it was up to me I would have reminded them who was the boss of the world..Great wrtting for a todler dam ..I do agree with your view on life, about love ,and help. inkmasterPs 10 from me...

soulwriter

12/05/2009

911 - to all those brave souls who now live in heaven, and too to the many who hold their memories in there hearts here all around each American who remembers each and every picture and sound of that day.

kdarcy commented on UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

10-25-2009

As sad as some things are in this life sometimes, we must remember them. It was a tragic event for all of us. A piece I will remember for some time. When each of us writes, it helps others to understand what they could not find the words or thoughts for. Thanks for sharing this write with countless numbers of people. Be well, k

soulwriter

10/29/2009

Your time and comments are much welcome and always appreciated.

Mareann commented on UNITED TEARS OF SYMPATHY AND STRENGTH

10-12-2009

Simply beautiful, It doesn't seem to matter how long it has been, it feels as though it was just yesterday. Thank you for writing and sharing. Mary

soulwriter

10/16/2009

Thank you for sharing your comments on this piece that has such a special meaning for all to remain in remembrance of every single person who was involved - the living and those who unknowing sacrificed their lives... and the countless heroes that we all should honor.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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