Unity

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  • True Love
    • JamilahAyanna
    • It's been a 5 year dry spell, but I'm back 😘😘

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    I'm in love with the most incredible man alive, if only everyone could experience this feeling then maybe the whole world would be at total peace just lyke he has made my heart......

    Unity

    My heart to you is given, so please give yours unto me,
    We'll lock them up together and throw away the key,
    True love is when your heart and mind say the same thing,
    But my mind is in the clouds and my heart wont cease to sing,
    Love isn't argumentative it does not dominate,
    It's planted deep in one's heart so that it can cultivate,
    Your love comforts me like sunshine after the rain,
    Your calm voice is enough to keep my crazy thoughts sane,
    Sweet thoughts of you dance around my head at night,
    Me and you together represents a future so bright,
     My hearts was chained up and thrown out into sea,
    Just awaiting that special one to come out and rescue me,
    I've been shot so much by Cupid so now there's nowhere left to aim,
    I don't need him for I've found you and I want your last name,
     Love is the most beautiful gift that we are given to share,
    But my love would be deceased had it not been for you standing there,
    I love you for the man that's deep inside of you,
    So compassionate it's easy for me to abide in you,
    I hope to look into your eyes to find the portal to your soul,
    Your perception of love is something I can extol,
      Love is not to be purchased and affection has no price,
    I'm trying to tell you all that's on my mind while making this poem concise,
     I'm scared, too scared to give it my all til you tell me to,
    Just the thought that you might leave and bid you final adieu,
    I used to think if I dreamed of you I wouldn't wanna wake ever,
    But dreams can only last a night and our love lasts forever,
     Butterflies need wings for beauty in which they didn't have from the start,
    And the beauty I've found in you lies in the chambers of your heart,
    I'm terrified to the fullest of being in love once more,
    I hate the thought of possibly losing the man who most I've come to adore,
    Take me love and never let go for I can't bare the rejection,
     Love me now, love me forever make me your only selection,
    You are what I never knew I always wanted,
    If I can't have you then may my heart be forever haunted,
    Like music on the waters is your sweet voice to me,
    I feel we make each other better how could anyone disagree,
    I wanna feel alive forever make me immortal with your kiss,
    With love's undying mysteries nothings more powerful than this,
    I didn't know I was looking for love until I found you,
    My whole persona is completely changed you have no clue,
    Love attacks the heart and makes you numb in the mind,
    It also strengthens your senses yet it can make us blind,
    But when I talk to you it's like all my emotions run wild,
    I feel so free and I feel so beguiled,
     Love of my Life is the title you hold,
    I'm ready to live this life with you forever so let the magic unfold,
    And behold, the beauty of love that stands in between us,
    May the purity of love never turn into an obscene lust,
    Promise no matter what we'll always see through the lies,
    False words is the one thing my heart decries,
     My heart to you is given, so please give yours unto me,
    We'll break every barrier and every chain and finally set them free....

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    gregster commented on Unity

    04-28-2010

    whoa....this is amazingly cute..THE LOVE OF CHRIST JEUS THE ALPHA AND OMEGA IS WHAT WE ALL NEED......stay blessed and stay breezy

    JamilahAyanna

    04/28/2010

    Thanx

    28jimmy commented on Unity

    03-22-2010

    wow i love this poem keep writin and dont never stop

    JamilahAyanna

    03/22/2010

    :) thanx sweetheart I wont and I'd love ur opinion on any otha 1s u'd lyke 2 read....

    danmartyjake1 commented on Unity

    02-22-2010

    Beautiful imagery, metaphors, rhymes and timing. I enjoyed this piece of writing.

    JamilahAyanna

    02/23/2010

    Thanx I appreciate ur input...

    BrokenAngel210 commented on Unity

    02-17-2010

    ahh jamilah jamilah...this was a masterpiece i really really loved it. i wish i could click a "love it" buttom, because i beyond like this poem. ps....how is ur name pronounced...is it.. ja.mee.la? or ja.my.la i'm just curious...to me the pronouncation sounds like jameela...which means "beautiful" in arabic...even if u pronounce it ja.my.la...it's still a beautiful name :-} i have to add this 2 my favorites...check out my euphoria...i just wrote it a couple days ago...i also wrote Rumors and Haraam about my husband...but as i told another friend i write as i feel. if i'm confused i write about it and if i'm happy i write about...cos she said euphoria is much different than the others, which it is...but i got tired of writing heartache.... neways...i didn't like it, i loved it!!

    NoName commented on Unity

    02-01-2010

    Well I can honestly say u have found da very deep root of love and been able 2 write it down on paper and u have no shame in lettin da world kno dat u've found sumbody dat makes u completely happy, u described dis guy in such a manner as if he wuz da most wonderful and important thing to u.....juz be careful and dnt fall 2 deep bcuz thurrs alwayz a chance of gettin hurt and if dat day eva comes I'll be right hurr 2 heal ya wounds baby...much love...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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