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  • Sadness

    Unkown Title

    My heart hangs by a broken hinge,
    Waiting to fall to the depths of the ocean of sorrows,
    Bruised and achy tenderness,
    Try as I may,
    I cannot seem to fill the voids,
    And my hearts desires remain ignored,
    Beauty torn from the shell of my still beating heart,
    Only leaving my sins and heartache,
    Through the cracks seeps emotions I've kept inside for so long,
    they spill over and yet no one seems to notice how broken I am,
    No one would know how to fix it even if they did Just happen to notice anyways,
    My stolen heart desperately needs to return to its cavity,
    Before time runs out.

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    rougepriest commented on Unkown Title

    10-03-2009

    its like so many i read here sophmoric and generic show me something new and exciting its like saying im hugry or i skinned my knee, what sins what heartbreak what emotions tried how how broken etc, pose not the questions unanswered dreamed, instead a medley not percieved

    1990lh commented on Unkown Title

    09-12-2009

    wow beautiful althought sad i fell ur pain/ nice write

    am2anangel commented on Unkown Title

    08-29-2009

    The pain and aching heart you display for all to see is evident in this piece. Your imagery very well portrayed. Sorrow and pain running abundantly. I enjoyed this work. Well done.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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