UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

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    UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

     U used by her to extract orgasmic delight
    N never thought of til the middle of the night
    M manly enough to quench all earthly desires
    A anxiously awating for our next tryst to transpire
    S sexuality is his middle name
    K kept around only to fan her flame
    E excitedly awaiting her to stroke the keys
    D deprived and disrespected yet willing to please

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    10-23-2010

    I really love your originality. Thanks for sharing your gift. It is truly unique...................E
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    phatdaddee

    10/25/2010

    Gift is questionable but I am always willing to share! I thank you for your honesty and acceptance!

    LesserPwn commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    10-06-2009

    I'm def. liking this piece, it has such a different feel than a lot of poems
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    phatdaddee

    10/07/2009

    Thank you sir, it was inspired by a fellow poet.

    JadedJezzabel commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    09-15-2009

    ahhhhh baby...... i didn't know it was like that. i'm going to p.m. u
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    jademelissa74 commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    09-07-2009

    NIcely crafted. Richly poetic and gravitating! It reels in the reader and maintains a level of interest. Great piece!
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    phatdaddee

    09/15/2009

    Thank you so much for your honest opinion, at least I hope its honest! Seriously, thanks for the comment!

    dahlusion commented on UNMASKED A Poem for S.Q.

    08-21-2009

    Brilliant in its creative design, poetic flow, and metaphorical phrasings. A real gem!
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    phatdaddee

    08/25/2009

    I pale in comparison to some of the masterful poems you've posted DAHL but that just makes me appreciate the feedback even more.Thanx!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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