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Dreams come and dreams go, sometimes dreams are only for show.
If you must know the truth for goodness sake,
why don't you check out all those dates?
The ones that did spoil you for nought,
the ones that figured you could be bought.
GOD saved you cause HE pleased, just get down on your knees.
The way you turn will cause you to earn, a free ticket out that's clout.
Wasn't that easy you don't have to shout,
you may be confused and babble about.
First remember your good deeds and stand
it's all in his Master plan.
So worry not about the condition of your hair,
I just took you on a dare, I was hoping to prepare.
A way for you to enter the night,
A way for you to set things write.
No they do not understand, that too is part of HIS plan.

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NenaT commented on UnSpoken

07-25-2009

I picture you talking to yourself in the mirror. "God knows what He's doing, have faith." It flow so well, it makes it easy to read. Very inspiring, very good.

PRIESTESSMACK

07/30/2009

SEE, I TOLD YOU THAT YOU GOOD. I TALK IN THE MIRROR SEVERAL TIMES A DAY.

ccslim commented on UnSpoken

04-19-2009

Content touches nicely. The ending threw me off following the highs preceding.

PRIESTESSMACK

07/03/2009

HOW DID MY ENDING THROW U OFF?

LostInThought commented on UnSpoken

02-09-2009

this was very uplifting and testing of faith. i really like how you remind us that he is there no matter the troubles we are going thru

PRIESTESSMACK

07/03/2009

AND HE IS ALWAYS THERE TO REMIND US, WE ARE NOT ALONE.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

PRIESTESSMACK’s Poems (29)

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TO GIVE OR LIVE 0
Declaration of Self 0
THANKFUL 0
Nectar of Love 0
THE TIGRESS 2
THE FALCON 0
THE LIONESS 1
DISPLEASED 1
THE GOVERNESS 1
FEMALE PHAROAH 2
TEMPTRESS 0
THE EAGLE 0
THE DONESS 1
TRUE STATEMENT 1
ADMISSION 2
THE NEGRESS 3
HURRY LOVE 2
DARK STRANGER 1
MYSELF 4
GIVE ME A BREAK 2
SpoKen 2
UnSpoken 3
MYSTIQUE 6
OUTSPOKEN 1
BLACK BRIDE 1
SWEET AGONY 4
WHITE ROSE 4
REVEL/AWOKEN 0
DONESS T'S BLUES 1