until next time

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    until next time

    His essence caused her to smile
    It has been a long while
    He whispers in her ear
    Telling her what she wants to hear
    Then they stand there face to face
    Their hearts start to race
    Desire in her eyes
    He knows why
    His essence she can feel
    They both know this is real
    Love is what they gave
    They start to ride a big wave
    At the end her eyes start to tear
    This is something they both dear
    Now they had to face their only fear
    Morning was near
    The sun would rise
    They would say their good byes
    ...Until next time

    11/13/08

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    SILKYTWEED commented on until next time

    07-06-2009

    Hot Write....I can feel the passion in this write, excellent, enjoyable and my imagination saw it all as I read...thanks!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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