untitled #18

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    untitled #18
    Silent tears of anger
    A sadly broken smile
    Innocence untrusting
    A vehement denial
    Forgiveness unworthy
    Suicidal dreams
    Unrequested life
    Ripping at the seams
    Forgotten days
    Drifting through time
    A lonely caged bird
    Silent as a mime

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    kdarcy commented on untitled #18

    06-27-2009

    An interesting read, you write of the minds dreams unknown to us as we sleep, as it struggles to find peace, all the opposites of what we need, want and desire to live happily. A bit random, but thats the way they pop in forever spinning around. Good write.
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    magicmanzz commented on untitled #18

    03-08-2009

    very well written i enjoyed it
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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