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    my hand reaches-
    fingers extending slowly
    and easily
    to you-
    a subtle offering of shiny jewels
    and plastic pardons
    laced with enthusiasm


    rich desirable curves
    go unnoticed-
    eyes flicker
    once
    twice
    offering reasons-
    both comforting
    and borrowed

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    DSLitz commented on untitled 2

    04-06-2009

    you paint beautful pictures in my mind and soul. the words impart feelings, the unseen force behind the moment, not just images

    lightcourier commented on untitled 2

    04-04-2009

    You have a real talent for painting images and concepts. This is the poetry I love to read again and again. Profoundly simple. Thanks.

    Madelynn commented on untitled 2

    04-03-2009

    Absolute talent!THIS IS INSANE GOOD.Cant beleiive it hasnt attracted more attention.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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