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    my hand reaches-
    fingers extending slowly
    and easily
    to you-
    a subtle offering of shiny jewels
    and plastic pardons
    laced with enthusiasm


    rich desirable curves
    go unnoticed-
    eyes flicker
    once
    twice
    offering reasons-
    both comforting
    and borrowed

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    DSLitz commented on untitled 2

    04-06-2009

    you paint beautful pictures in my mind and soul. the words impart feelings, the unseen force behind the moment, not just images

    lightcourier commented on untitled 2

    04-04-2009

    You have a real talent for painting images and concepts. This is the poetry I love to read again and again. Profoundly simple. Thanks.

    Madelynn commented on untitled 2

    04-03-2009

    Absolute talent!THIS IS INSANE GOOD.Cant beleiive it hasnt attracted more attention.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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