Falling

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Falling




futility less necessity is (
                                       .....)
city full of futility where
iNSTiTUTiONS  f
                             a
                               l
                                l
                                  with their
full force on IndIvIduals! who were
to be served not - to be ruled

IndIvIdual less souls fail to fight for
(their right to responsibility.......)

fail to fulfill their promise, fail to
condemn themselves while the blame f
                                                     a
                                                       l
                                                        l
                                                         s
on......
their iNSTiTUTiONS for absorbing guilt
and IndIvIdualIty
.....(
         ) is futility less necessary?

 

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earthly commented on Falling

02-16-2010

interesting-yes we do so often lose the feeling of (I)-getting lost in the pressure of society/life...Earthly

redbloodink commented on Falling

12-21-2009

Milk wow..... this is an awesome format.... I think this would piss many people off that think they are some-one to be served thinking they were greater then another.... Job well done.... as we all fall He will stand and take us back into His loving arms.... now that is awesome to me... thanx Milk... never think that you should quit this amazing talent you have... red

orangepony commented on Falling

08-09-2009

on this i do agree,express yourself in this matter,just add a spice of nice,thank,orangepony

photochick commented on Falling

07-23-2009

very different and catches the readers attention that's for sure great poem and structure I enjoyed it thanks for sharing

sammia commented on Falling

07-22-2009

i like it. the words falling is really kool..great job

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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