waiting

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    dreams are not unrealistic
        but, people can be
            and the limits we put on ourselves
                 often shelves that more golden thought

    overwhelmed by sorrow
    we put away for overmorrow
    which quite frankly never arrives

    and i am guilty as well
    sitting here in my paint by number hell

    procrastinating

    my creativity and concinitty
         are often in the vicinity of some deep slumber
              wake up from the sleep over
    or wash it off
         with strong soap and heavy water






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    dahlusion commented on waiting

    04-29-2013

    Beautifully composed in its dreamy language and self-critical explanations; a lyricism of impatient suffering and exploration in thinking. Bravo!

    Crush

    04/29/2013

    i wish everyone spoke like you ! especially about poetry ! thank you so much, Dahlu. I am one of YOUR fans !!!

    dahlusion

    05/01/2013

    Thank you! And I look forward to your posts.

    cheronld commented on waiting

    04-27-2013

    What comes to mind after reading this....is but one thought that came from a movie title.....EYES WIDE SHUT.....it fits my inner voice of this write....nice my friend....somehow I think for you, it may be and stay....unfinished...lol....Cher

    Crush

    04/27/2013

    thank you , Cher. I feel like I have missed you even though I have never met you. I miss your comments and critiques. how have you been ? I have been on sort of hiatus because i have been concentrating on putting together and creating watercolor paintings for my own art exhibit this Fall. YAY ! thank you.

    cheronld

    04/28/2013

    Ahhh...thanks Crush....but I get it....I have missed reading you as well...time just seems to get away from us...but I'm doing fine....Congratulations on your upcoming Exhibit...btw...put one aside for me on the down low.....Lol...take care of you and yours....Cher

    trocka7 commented on waiting

    03-08-2013

    Love it! "Paint-by-number hell" is a fabulous line, totally captures the self imposed limitations we all seem to have without even knowing it, until we of course attain a level of consciousness where we can step outside of ourselves and observe our own behaviours. And even when we have that ability, we can so easily be drawn back in without even noticing that we are indeed shelving our "golden thoughts"....

    Crush

    03/09/2013

    thank you ! i thought this one was too choppy and lacked the flow that i so seperately seek. however, with all that said, you got my message loud and clear. thank you for taking the time Trocka7

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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