Untitled Sappy Love Song

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    Hey look, something positive! Haha, the other night, a friend asked me to help write a love song, so I wrote this. Though it was for them in action, it's for someone entirely different in its meaning and spirit... Hopefully, that makes sense . Anyway, I hope y'all like it.

    Untitled Sappy Love Song

    I can see in your smile
    Every once in a while
    That somewhere inside
    You hold arms open wide
    To what love may
    Come your way
    And there's a music in your eyes
    Whose sound never lies
    Singing softly of who you are
    My blue eyed shining star
    I hear the enchanting melody
    Calling out just to me
    And I can't help but listen
    To the beauty from within
    Please take my hand and believe
    That I would never leave
    For you I'd write infinite lyrics
    I'd waste away all my picks
    Just to write you a song
    With words kept inside for too long
    For you to know what you meant
    That I know you're heaven sent
    Baby you're the world to me
    You're all I really care to see
    I want you to know just what you are
    My blue eyed angel, my shining star...

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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