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    I thought I understood
    I thought that my life was perfect,
    But it was not.
    I had traded my heart for pain.
    A pain so great it sent my world spinning,
    my heart bled as my memories faded.
    Now I do not know whom I hate,
    Whom I can trust.
    My heart has been shattered and replaced
    By a heart of stone.

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    sk8ergirl commented on Untitled

    10-27-2009

    that was a great poem i really liked it and can really relate to it. thanks
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    1990lh commented on Untitled

    10-25-2009

    yep that is how the song of loves play, makes u walk on clouds just to laugh at yu when gravity kicks back in.
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    graceladymn commented on Untitled

    03-15-2009

    Love for you.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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