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I thought I understood
I thought that my life was perfect,
But it was not.
I had traded my heart for pain.
A pain so great it sent my world spinning,
my heart bled as my memories faded.
Now I do not know whom I hate,
Whom I can trust.
My heart has been shattered and replaced
By a heart of stone.

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sk8ergirl commented on Untitled

10-27-2009

that was a great poem i really liked it and can really relate to it. thanks

1990lh commented on Untitled

10-25-2009

yep that is how the song of loves play, makes u walk on clouds just to laugh at yu when gravity kicks back in.

graceladymn commented on Untitled

03-15-2009

Love for you.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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