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    beneath lines of grey
    he shudders and pulls at
    each side
    resting his fingertips lightly upon
    the soiled ledge-
    the jagged edges leak
    black oil smiles
    reaping pre-sorted freedom

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    wagus commented on untitled

    06-10-2009

    Saw this one untitled and thought would give it a read.. Most times when can't think of title and it short just use the first and last word for one until can come up with better here: Beneath Freedom....... which seems like a good one for it... then resting sticks out so.... Resting Beneath Freedom comes up.... anyway hope ya find a title for it..... as it needs one to get folks attention as most time look at title for words to fit mood in.... and skip untitled ones.....wagus

    lightcourier commented on untitled

    05-02-2009

    Ahh yes. So openended and full of inference. Very nice. Thanks!

    Madelynn commented on untitled

    04-03-2009

    Yes! this is the discriptive stuff I have been craving,an artist born,not made.Love it.

    WordSlinger commented on untitled

    03-25-2009

    Sounds like me roofing, :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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