Untitled

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    Untitled

    Weeping eyes cry; cry for the lie to end,
    cry for anew to begin,
    with no friends.
    No ruckus; just us,
    No lying; simple trust.
    Beautifully young were we,
    He and I, I and he.
    Weeping eyes try; try to get past this,
    try to continue our bliss
    a doubtful kiss
    Shall I dismiss?
    No phony s***; I should be it.
    Nothing concealed; it ALL needs to be revealed.
    Beautifully young were we,
    He and I, I and he.
    Weeping eyes die; die from heartache,
    Die; feeling like I've been raped,
    Seems like this whole thing has been taped.
    Rehearsed....sum kinda game,
    Hurting me and losing a good woman in the same.
    With my emotions on the line,
    Sheltered behind my smile I'm not fine,
    I thought he was mine....mine....all mine.
    Weeping eyes oh my, oh my, oh my!
    I feel sooo dumb,
    I'm baffled and mislaid that
    I don't know what to call this f***ing poem!
    Nelly

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    cmlestrade commented on Untitled

    07-18-2009

    Call this F****ing poem well written and beautifully crafted. I loved it. good words, intense and powerful. keep it up

    JadedJezzabel commented on Untitled

    05-12-2009

    great poem

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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