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  • Lost Love

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    I know now that I love him.
    It looks so simple when written;
    Like the pen didn't hover-
    the Poet didn't struggle-
    to make such a weighted declaration
    final-permanent-openly stated.
     
    You'd never know
    that such an epiphany
    is doubled edged-a sword
    that cuts only her.
    Because once it's said-
    it can't be withdrawn-
    but more so-even though it's said-
    it won't matter-
    it won't change anything.
     
    It only makes the pain more acute.
    The loss that much greater-
    it only makes her realize
    that she never lost anything
    because she never had it to begin with.
     
    The pain is so great-
    she can't even cry.
     
    So silly for a mortal to love a God-
    But I know now-that I do love him.
     
    The pen hovered.
    the blood drawn.

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    toredbloodink commented on Untitled

    03-14-2017

    And the stain leaves the heart.. I love to see raw bleeding writes like these. They help another see healing is possible beautifully done the picture i got to see was two people coming together after brokeness in love.. Amazing ...Redbloodink

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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