untitled

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  • beleieveme
  • is still finding herself and is enjoying the ride.....

untitled

i simply write this poem because i really dont know what to say
i sincerly write this poem because everything around me feels so far away
i hear a lot of problems
i see alot of things
i know a little too much
but wind still beneath my wings
i strive
i look beyond all the mess and all the wrong right now
and still say i can make it
simply named untitled because i really cant figure out what to call it
everyhtings so bunched up every sound so diguised
everything just seems like deciet in my eyes
i wanna believe
i wanna say that i can go on without you
i can make it without u
but not being so true
no believe the words that you hear or i share
i want to say "free me"
in fact i want to scream it
here....now the words are able to come about
now i can think
there is actual room up there for me to say
that i know what im saying and not have to second guess it
untitled, enedited...more like the directors cut
the real me
what im really thinking
still unknown but i can actually say only i and he will always know how i feel and he will never judge
but understand and find away to fix it and once he's fixed it
then and only then will this have a title

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Louise commented on untitled

07-14-2009

You're very young at the peak of your life. You don't know who you want to be and then it's complicated by love. Sometimes life is like a yoyo. Continue to write and share you feelings.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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