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     Black eye, blue eye, red, green, purple it doesn't matter.
     Cause when you hit me that's gone matter.
     You say that you've been treated badly by every girl that you've been with.
     Just because you've done like that don't mean you gone treat me like this.
     I'm a queen no female deserves to be treated like this.
     You slapping me only shows me that you are no man.
     How could you ever place your fingers to her face that right there shows that your a disgrace to your momma, i'm sure she wouldn't be proud?
     Let me ask you this would you be proud if this same crap that you pulled was done to your child?
     I don't thank so so keep your hands to your side and your feet to the floor.
     I hope she builds up the nerves to let you go.
     You not worth her and her life and when she sees that she will know hopefully it won't be to late for her to go.
     Leave girl while you still got sense the longer you stay the more you'll believe this nonsense, it'll start being true to you will start making up lies for his wrong before this is done girlbe gone.
     

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    fawndesno10 commented on untitled

    06-24-2009

    wow i can relate to this big time...my boyfriend used to beat me all the time...now he dont cuz i told im leave....good poem...

    sierrah

    06/26/2009

    thanx 4 da support

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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