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    Never knowing what I feel
    Why am I this way?
    Never knowing what to feel
    Why can't I think of what to say?
    Dreams taken from me
    Never coming true
    All my life taken from me
    but i don't know what to do
    Suffering is all I feel
    so how do I deal?
    Suffering is all I think
    should I let myself sink?
    Sink deeper and deeper away from myself
    there's no one to help
    I'm all alone now
    I'm all alone now
    to keep on living I don't know how.

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    jferclark commented on Untitled

    08-08-2009

    I feel the pain and emotion here. well written and from the soul... read some of my stuff... we'll keep each other afloat.

    bforibus commented on Untitled

    06-15-2009

    sounds lk that final last look in the mirror before doing something drastic. i love the darkness in this poem. great job

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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