Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

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    for baby, Landon Charles, who lived for only 24 heavenly minutes he is loved

    Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    Baby lashes flutter in the soft light's rays

    Angels watch silently from a heavenly haze

    Tell me, little baby, what do you dream?

    Of Mommy's tears that softly flow?

    Of Daddy's kisses that suddenly slow?
     
    Comforting silence embraces the night

    On angels' wings, his soul takes flight.

    Tell me, little angel, what do you dream?

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    MalikPeterson commented on Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    05-16-2010

    This is a softhearted poem in the wake of something tragic...I commend you for being able to put out such a delicate piece of writing :)

    SuperChick76 commented on Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    05-08-2010

    aww, that's so sweet. Only 24 hours? :( It's a beautifuly poem, mandi. Thank you for sharing.

    Laurenrose commented on Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    05-06-2010

    I always wondered what babies dream, this poems describes the wonder exact

    passionflower commented on Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    04-08-2010

    Beautiful poem and sad. I like how the words flow.

    redbloodink commented on Tell Me Little Baby what do you see?

    04-08-2010

    I dream of being a fashion model.......... that's mine what's yours.......... ? red

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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