A Lifetime for you

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I honestly don't know how I feel about this poem. While it came from the heart it pains me to think that it is true, all of it...

A Lifetime for you

I never thought I’d see the day
You’d forget how much you mean to me
What does that say?

I’ve spent an endless night
Trying to help you shed some light
Giving all I had to give

I even gave you my heart to carry
You held it for a moment so tenderly
Now you take a shovel and began to bury

In giving everything I lost it all
I will admit that it's a little bit ironic
But next to you I'll forever stand tall

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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