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    I am really trying, God
    but nothing works
    I just want to be real and normal
    Like others but still myself.
    I really dont want to die, God
    I just dont know how to live
    In this world that isnt mine
    I dont know how to take up my cross and carry it for myself,
    Only for others and now I cant even do that
    So,God can you tell me what I must do?
    Shall I suffer on and on
    Unable to convey what is in my heart?
    Without giving I am nothing, I have nothing left to give.
    Shall I live, an empty shell
    No way to serve any longer?
    Or fade into the night You created
     When you made the Light?
    The nails that hold me here, God
    Sag beneath my weight
    I no longer can carry the bigger load...

    So, God show me what you want of me
    Speak to my heart as only you can do.

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    redbloodink commented on Untitled

    11-29-2009

    Coper this is a beautiful write...... We never realize or see what He needs us to do all the time....... I can tell you this tho Coper we can go nowhere run no where that He can't find us.... God uses us as He needs too not what we think He needs.... I'm sure there is something that He needs you for...... I hope that He calls to you soon and shows you witch way to go.... Much blessings to you Coper..... Love Red
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    kdarcy commented on Untitled

    10-25-2009

    Simply said but heartfelt by many I'm sure. The small load is sometimes the more valuable, the silent whisper better heard by the one listening. Be well and realize you do not have to always feel needed or know, or understand your special mission here to fulfill or having already filled it. k
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    wheelsal commented on Untitled

    06-28-2009

    The age old plea from the age old weakness of all. Your prayer is said well.....................................
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    akayakar commented on Untitled

    03-22-2009

    AMEN! But you know, God does have a place for you. Where you can give to others as much as they give to you. You just have to listen. That little small voice. The one we always ignore, is the one we have to listen too!
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    cinque commented on Untitled

    03-12-2009

    You seem to be able to convey your feelings very well sugar! Get it all out, you express your angst well!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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