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Why don't i trust you anymore,

Why can't i feel your skin as it renders me helpless and brakes my hard shell  in a fragile place,

Looking at the image I've painted it resembles nothing of you,

The person once in my minds eye is not the same at the one standing before  me,

Was it cause you didn't love me like i did you?,

Because you couldn't show what i had given you?,

Kindness,

Care,

Solace,

A place to lay your head?,

Instead you pu
shed me to the point of feeling dead,

You showed what they had shown you,

Only what you knew

As you'd claw my neck in rage,

As you would my back in passion.

Cheat and Abuse the love i had given you,

So i shall take what was once a gift,

What was
once yours to hold, the kindness you craved and enjoyed so,

The care that kept you safe and unharmed,

The solace you took refuge in so delightfully,

The trust that never doubted you,

And last but not least  the place you'd lay,

The place where all your troubles lay aside,

Where you could rested your weary head,

Over my heart,

The place you called your own,

Was it cause you couldn't  love me like i did you?,

Cause you could only show me what they did you?

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wamomo commented on untitled

03-27-2010

Nice work! Very articulate in the expression of your experience...very well done...Blessings ~ Wamomo

hoda commented on untitled

03-13-2010

Great poem. I like how emotional it is. Keep it up! ^_^

Loke commented on untitled

02-14-2010

I like this poem. It speaks to me on a level. And it keeps going.

charlex

02/14/2010

it's unfinished, unfortunately. Least it feels unfinished.

redbloodink commented on untitled

02-07-2010

this is a great write... I believe we should love....... no matter what... I know you were talking about a physical one but love is way more and deeper then physical....... red

charlex

02/07/2010

i dont just mean psysical, only that part refers too it, its meant to show how bad it got when things go wrong, like when one hits the other.

redbloodink

02/07/2010

well it didn't come across like such... but in that case the people need to go thier own ways.... reconsile a friendship if you two can and let it be... blessings.....

knight4696 commented on untitled

01-31-2010

Nice debut Charlex - I like the questioning thru out and the flow of emotion you put into it. Nice job!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

charlex’s Poems (6)

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