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    • shakeme4life
    • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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    Rhythm of love

    Untitled

    Everyday , the beating of my invisible door .... 
    reminds me of the time ...
    each bang , boom, bop , bop , bop .
    waking up a new thought in me .

    I am reminded of the love i thought i had ,
    the love that i longed for .. the love
    that seemed to evade me ..

    Tones of swissss, swang , swang , swissssss , swang...
    Played sweet false notes in my ear ...
    with each changing season less cheer ...

    The shapes painted against my walls , from the
    intruding sun light . all reminders of your face
    sounds of thump , tiss, thump ,tiss, thump  
    got my heart in a unsteady race .

    Each time i hear your voice ..... My mind escapes
    soley to free my heart ... I imagine your eyes
    so deep i get lost for days ...mmm, mmmm, mmmm,
    is the sound my spirit hears putting me into a
    entraped trance ,,, a sensual lovers dance  

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Untitled

    06-27-2011

    I like the longing, and desire in this poem. The intense rush of emotions you feel when you think of love and the one you love. I know this tune well. Great write! I really get it...............E

    shakeme4life

    06/28/2011

    Thanks big cousin ... i love the E at the end of each comment ... it stands out as you do ..

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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