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    • shakeme4life
    • Learn yourself, love yourself, and respect yourself! Your past is but on step towards your future.

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    Rhythm of love

    Untitled

    Everyday , the beating of my invisible door .... 
    reminds me of the time ...
    each bang , boom, bop , bop , bop .
    waking up a new thought in me .

    I am reminded of the love i thought i had ,
    the love that i longed for .. the love
    that seemed to evade me ..

    Tones of swissss, swang , swang , swissssss , swang...
    Played sweet false notes in my ear ...
    with each changing season less cheer ...

    The shapes painted against my walls , from the
    intruding sun light . all reminders of your face
    sounds of thump , tiss, thump ,tiss, thump  
    got my heart in a unsteady race .

    Each time i hear your voice ..... My mind escapes
    soley to free my heart ... I imagine your eyes
    so deep i get lost for days ...mmm, mmmm, mmmm,
    is the sound my spirit hears putting me into a
    entraped trance ,,, a sensual lovers dance  

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Untitled

    06-27-2011

    I like the longing, and desire in this poem. The intense rush of emotions you feel when you think of love and the one you love. I know this tune well. Great write! I really get it...............E

    shakeme4life

    06/28/2011

    Thanks big cousin ... i love the E at the end of each comment ... it stands out as you do ..

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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