Broken

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    Broken

    Broken beyond repair
    Lost for words unspoken
    Alone in my dispair
    In need of that lucky token
    Confused far past comprehension
    Giving up is my other option
    Asked for my irregarded opinion
    Too quiet, my only sin
    You take my breath away
    Just to watch me suffocate
    Mislead by your remarks
    An arguement is what starts
    So let me be
    In my power lost
    Later to see
    That I have just been crossed

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    philjonesin commented on Broken

    10-10-2010

    wonderful visual poetry. felt that pain. keep slingin that truth lady and add me please .

    ravenrose commented on Broken

    09-20-2009

    wow. this one touched my soul. i feel like that sometimes. ive been in pain alot.

    Legos12 commented on Broken

    09-18-2009

    ooh, wow! Very almost - eerie sounding. Great read, spooky and full of meaning. It is straight-forward yet there is still room to interpret. i like that. Well done.

    kmooney commented on Broken

    09-18-2009

    Wonderful write Ms. Chelles. I liked the message here. It is simple yet complex. Honest and insightful. Seems to reach below the surface. Great write. Read my poem Faceless Child. Would love your opinion on it....Thanks of sharing. K

    SuperDan commented on Broken

    09-18-2009

    Very beautifully written I love it. Stupendeus and speaks to my heart and soul forvever. Very well done

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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