Untouchable

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Untouchable

On a cold winter's night, the brisk wind blows.
It tosses my hair across my face.
As I embark on a new journey of only which tales have been told of a fate worse than death, I move closer to face what I have feared.
Though you try to bleed my life from my body, there is a force more stronger than death that guides me to do grasp my dreams and become what I want to be.
Whether it may be strong as bamboo,
or gentle as a butterfly's wing,
I am ready for whatever, whenever, and whoever, that may threaten my existence.
As I stare at my hands with its youthful creases, those that hate me should feel threatened.
For isn't it true that even a dove's wings can be fatal to a foolish man.

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TinaD commented on Untouchable

12-09-2010

Such a deep thinker you are at twenty-one....Wow...it can only get better with age...none of us will keep up to you!

Richisfun commented on Untouchable

10-11-2010

You speak with strength china in your poem, i bet in real life you do feel this way and i love that !! chinarich

PRober commented on Untouchable

07-20-2009

hmmm.. very deep but as usual (from your catalog)... well written, write on!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

chinablack’s Poems (48)

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