Unwilling

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    Unwilling
    Pictures tumbled from the wall
    From the collision with my body
    Fragrant pieces of shattered glass
    Impaled my head and face

    I scrambled for safety
    Through puddles of crimson graffiti
    Sanctity just out of reach

    I froze lost in the dark void
    Violently shaking, terribly scared
    Nowhere to run, Nowhere to hide

    Blood poured from my veins
    Bruises decorated my flesh
    Bones broken and snapped

    Defeated I laid, abandoned and ashamed
    Bullet in my chest, knife in my heart
    Unable to fight, Unwilling to die!!!!



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    soulwriter commented on Unwilling

    05-19-2009

    You beautifully expressed your inward being, raw and exposed the core, and your words sting with reality... thanks for sharing your story and your talent.
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    StandingBear commented on Unwilling

    05-12-2009

    Human and spirit intertwined. A path to follow. Great write. 10
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    Vampi commented on Unwilling

    04-29-2009

    another fantastic write! It's so hard to put into words how your poetry rivets me to the core. Wonderful!
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    lonewolf commented on Unwilling

    04-29-2009

    as long as you are willing to fight, you will never die. once again you words touch me.
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    orsonav commented on Unwilling

    04-26-2009

    Very power picture of a dark situation. Great Write!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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