mikeg commented on Upon Noticing!

12-11-2009

You read at first you can't pick it up. Looking over it, you still don't grasp. That title tells you what this is about. Those feelings quickly dominate as you see someone you care deeply about. I like this interpretation of your poem. Love is a powerful thing and those emotions are just as powerful. Great way to command the readers mind into relating it either to themselves or what they think the author is feeling. Excellent!!

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DestinedQueen commented on Upon Noticing!

11-15-2009

So many emotions go into this! I love how expressive it is. You have aggravation, torment, confusion, fury, and anxiety not much possitive but all emotions that we humans under the pressure of the so-called human condition feel upon noticing or realizing the devestation that is life itself. But please be aware that life is not all fury and malcontent. Great job! DQ

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jesusfreake commented on Upon Noticing!

07-16-2009

great job, sno....what else can i say u did wonderful...

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