Using You

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Using You

Me and you be stuck together like glue

 

I get so tired of seeing you that my skin turns blue

 

Sometimes I just want to hit you with a muddy shoe

 

Being around you makes me catch the flue

 

I swear I’m through…..

 

I wonder would you leave if I scare you by saying BOO!

 

But I guess I want sense you always buy me things that are new

 

Therefore I will always stay with you until you find out that I don’t need you

 

I’m telling you I’m through…..

 

I played you so hard over the years which you never had a clue

 

You even gave me most of your pay checks which I never asked you

 

Girl I just want you to realize I’m only using you

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Chaos128 commented on Using You

10-20-2009

Familiarity breeds contempt, as the saying goes, but this here is industrial strength. I guess it's better to make things plain but you might want to drop a couple of lumps of sugar in that battery acid, brother.

almonord1990

10/27/2009

OK THANKS

SecretPanda8491 commented on Using You

10-11-2009

If this is true I feel sorry for you, and for her. I know how it feels to be used. Its great to put your thoughts on paper.... now show it to her. Keep expressing yourself .... it helps.

MIKE3447 commented on Using You

10-04-2009

I FIND THIS TO BE VERY FUNNY . KEEP HAVING FUN WITH YOUR WORK

Stryx commented on Using You

10-04-2009

Sorry, my friend - rhyming last words in consecutive lines AIN'T poetry.

SecretPanda8491

10/11/2009

not sure if I totally agree with that Stryx .... I think alot depends on the story and how it is written

MsKrystle commented on Using You

06-09-2009

Wow, I hope this isnt how you really are; but then again you cant blame a man for using a woman if she allows it. Some parts I found a bit amusing. Overall its a good poem

almonord1990

10/04/2009

NO WAY I WANT NEVER USE A FEMALE. I LET THEM USE ME. AND THINGS LIKE THIS JUST COME TO MIND BECAUSE IT HAPPENS EVERYDAY. JUST ON HERE TRYING TO GET A DEAL AND GET PUBULISHED. GOT ALLOT MORE COMING SOON.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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Title Comments
In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7