Vampires Kiss

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    Vampires Kiss




    Somethings draining me
    draining me of my poetry.
    Taking away my precious words
    so that they cannot be heard..


    A vampires kiss I recieved
    I was honestly decieved.
    Stealing away my own breath
    bringing around my slow death.


    Not a physical death you see
    but a poetic birth decreased.
    Inhaling my talent from me
    taking it unto thee.


    Something vampiric is drainging me
    taking words of poetry.
    Trying to suck me dry
    tears of blood I now do cry.

    Mysticangel 2/19/09

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    ginga commented on Vampires Kiss

    06-09-2009

    Well a writer's block now has been solved! lol. Really I loved the creative way you use the vampire and how the victim fears it's loss. ginga
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    WordSlinger commented on Vampires Kiss

    03-24-2009

    (8) Interesting, where a turtle neck , so we can have more of your poetry
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    dangedmanjr commented on Vampires Kiss

    03-12-2009

    and I LOVE vampires!
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    chadallac74 commented on Vampires Kiss

    02-28-2009

    I feel it and I think this is great!!! Carried me the whole way through. Very nice rhythm too.
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    fluv77 commented on Vampires Kiss

    02-25-2009

    very nice and very interesting.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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