velvet life

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    velvet life

    A velvet life so sweet and soft
    comforting and sheltered and warm
    but out in the world there's much more
    to be seen
    so go out and live get-away
    from this velvet life
     get out of the dark and into the world
    JUST LIVE

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    winterkou commented on velvet life

    02-26-2010

    not much here but short and to the point. I enjoyed the real me- Going onto the next write.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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