Virgin Territory Chartered
A Virgin territory Youve decided to charter. Mine its oil, Strip its mountains of all their valuables Extract its golds, copper tones and precious stones. Tear down its outerlayers Youve stumbled upon this place Wondered into the lands that are my cliches A world of excitement and innocence. Of fun manic highs and low gutter lows. Here you are, This place you were once a stranger to but now call home. Here, in my mind youve found your niche. Left your mark Made everything unlike it was before. Here you are Unbalancing me Here you are to stay For youve wondered into my thoughts ....and you never left.Virgin Territory Chartered
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Artie commented on Virgin Territory Chartered
07-17-2010
- Like a bull in a china shop, the one we want, changes everything. Another impressive write - 10 from me ratings or not
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ginga commented on Virgin Territory Chartered
04-27-2010
- chalkout, This poem is outstanding, graphic and full of imagery. ty for a work of art wrapped up in poetry. ginga
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passionflower commented on Virgin Territory Chartered
04-09-2010
- great poem loved it. i will give you an 8 keep the good work.
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samberr commented on Virgin Territory Chartered
04-09-2010
- Really enjoyed this , piece, love the last line , For youve wondered into my thoughts ....and you never left. very nice
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bluewolf commented on Virgin Territory Chartered
04-07-2010
- Love is a game of chance, oft filled with pain and unfilled. When all is said and done it in up to the individual as the value and worth of taking such a leap of faith.
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