vision of love

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    • shakeme4life
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    vision of love

    The love I've visions of 
    Is pure , It's unconditional.
    the love of generations of breeding,
    a love of honor , respect .
    the force is so powerful
    it raises the sun to rise.
    It's what tells our brains to function,
    the very thing that allows our lungs
    to receive the air it breaths.
     a love that can hold no regret ,
    love that makes champions perform
    without fail.


    The love I've dreamed of
    heals wounds of every kind.
    ends world hunger ,
    deceases suffering without a plan.
    The love that opens your eternal eyes
    to see the beauty of  how love grows.
    teaches my heart to hear your love,
    and my ears to lift your soul.
    love that's not subtle , 
    my spirits screams like a banchee 
    to let the entire world know.


    The love of the heavens above , 
    like the quenching drops of rain 
    falling from the softest clouds
    with the love as vast as the sky
    nurturing every living thing
    visiting you where ever you are
    embracing you as the emblical cord 
    supplied you liquid love.
    A love so precious  
    you couldn't survive , if you 
    held back your love from me.
     

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on vision of love

    09-07-2011

    This poem makes me think of God's love and the way he allow us each day to get up. breathe and experience life. I feel your gratitude for life in this piece. It reminds me to be thankful every day for everything whether great or small. Work on the flow in this one so it can be a little more refined. Good write........E

    shakeme4life

    09/07/2011

    Thank you for the feedback ... I love the fact that your giving constructive critique ... well excepted

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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