VOICES

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VOICES

Voices in my head, head, head, head!! I just can't let them gooo!! These voices in my head, head, head, head!! Feeling like I gonna blow!!  It' s plain that I can see, they won't let go of mee!!! Voices in my head, voices in my head! This is breaking me down, I'm hanging by a toenail and feeling like I'll drown, don't know if I'm coming up or downnn!! I can't just let this gooo, no matter which way I show, voices in my head,head, head, head, feeling like I'm gonna blow!!! Now it's plain to me, the situation of my realityyy!! As far as I can see, implosion in this life for me!!  Voices in my head, voices in my head, hanging by this thread of mine, running out of time, they tell me I should let you go!!! Voice, voices in my, voices in my head, head, head, I can't just let it go!!!!  No matter what they say, I'll end up leaving anyway!! Voice, voice, voice, voices in my head, voices in my head!!!!

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Bettysrainbow48 commented on VOICES

11-04-2009

This sounds like you have an understanding for the poor people who have an illness that crys out for help. The enter voice that tells them what to do while reaching out.What a capture ! Good Job.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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