Waited...still waiting

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    Waited...still waiting

    I waited for you but you never came
    you treat my heart like its some kind of game

    And instead of telling you how i feel
    i sitting here alone in this empty house
    complaining to no one but me myself and i

    Often wondering why

    I wait for you
    listening to the stupid things you say
    and the selfish things you do
    just to have your way
    in life
    in my life
    its all control
    gaining grips to hold
    because you can't met your own goal

    silly i may be
    stupid i am not
    not even close
    to think i was the one who loved you the most
    and you just watched me walk on by
    when all i can do now is sigh
    and wonder why
    i even waste my time.

    You think of no one else but your own
    i stare at you
    like I've placed my self in the twilight zone
    who would have known
    it would end up like this
    all of this madness
    and if that's not enough here is the twist.

    I waited for you
    and when you didn't come
    i cried
    felt like a lost child
    and i don't know why

    i love you even when i try to define it
    i do and all of the crazy things you do
    wish i didn't hate to love you.

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    alexis5366 commented on Waited...still waiting

    07-22-2009

    Wow, loved it ! sometime people don't realize what they have till it's gone, the emotions we go though expericing life, the circle of love keep it up...

    Bonofied commented on Waited...still waiting

    03-24-2009

    you are a poet to the tenth power

    bforibus commented on Waited...still waiting

    03-23-2009

    sounds like the cycle of violence played in a poem. very good write

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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