waiting

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  • Confusion

    waiting

    all my life
    i sit and wait
    for you to come to my door
    but when will
    this waiting end
    and i have what i'm waiting for

    i love you
    is what you say
    everytime you speak to me
    but i ask
    to you each day
    is how do you feel truly

    how long will
    i sit and wait
    for you to cherish me
    i want this
    to just end
    and to stop this waiting

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    Rhymer commented on waiting

    05-08-2010

    Unrequited love and longing excellent piece. 10........................

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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