waiting

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  • Confusion

    waiting

    all my life
    i sit and wait
    for you to come to my door
    but when will
    this waiting end
    and i have what i'm waiting for

    i love you
    is what you say
    everytime you speak to me
    but i ask
    to you each day
    is how do you feel truly

    how long will
    i sit and wait
    for you to cherish me
    i want this
    to just end
    and to stop this waiting

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    Rhymer commented on waiting

    05-08-2010

    Unrequited love and longing excellent piece. 10........................

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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