Waiting
many days, many years
I’ve passed!
and
many days, many years
I’ve to pass …
TO BE BORN!
Waiting
4 Comments
Tags: Inspirational
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09-28-2009
- i really enjoy your work blueroad. the clearness and length are perfect
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09-19-2009
- this is very short, yet so insightful...I enjoyed this, thank you for sharing!
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sonnyskies commented on Waiting
09-18-2009
- I can sense the longing period of time, waiting for something dramatic to happen, in your poem. But once that explosion of birth happens, the song leaves off...!
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lindabrito commented on Waiting
09-15-2009
- I liked your poem. I am glad I finally figured out how to meet my friends. I am new at this.
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