walk in the park

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    walk in the park

    Walk in the park

     

    One day while I was walking in the park

    I bumped into Jesus

    He said let Me change your heart

    I said as far as I know it’s ok

    I said maybe another day

    Because I don’t wanna waste your time

    He said trust Me and everything will be fine

    You can do anything in My name

    Just let Me seal it on your brain

    So we decided to take a seat

    And He started to tell me about eternity

    So I went under the knife

    And accepted Jesus offer of eternal life

    So after my heart transplant

    I began to feel like a brand new man

    And that’s all because of our Lord and Savior

    Who did me that special favor

     

     

     

     

    Written by marvin crutchfield

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    winterkou commented on walk in the park

    07-21-2010

    All praises to Yaweh . We need to lift Him up . We dont know the time when he will come we need be ready. I'm glad i gave him my heart.
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    1990lh commented on walk in the park

    07-03-2010

    oh i love tis one! yeah i like how you tell a story with it too. it's a very serious message but delivered in a simple way.
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    Mrpoetry

    07/06/2010

    my job as always is to tell the truth and thanks again for your kind words. Jesus is reason for the season

    jtlove commented on walk in the park

    07-02-2010

    I would like to know the before and afters of going under the knife. H
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    Mrpoetry

    07/02/2010

    it was a metaphor, Jesus changed my heart

    Artie commented on walk in the park

    07-01-2010

    Very good piece. I like the way you tell this story - 10 from me
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    Mrpoetry

    07/02/2010

    thank you Art

    SuperChick76 commented on walk in the park

    07-01-2010

    Interesting read. Very clear in it's message. God is good, man, god is good.
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    Mrpoetry

    07/01/2010

    thank you superchick God is good

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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