Walking Away

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    Walking Away

    A rotten bitter taste
    You left in my mouth
    A harsh reality
    You slammed on the table
    You did not know me
    You did not care
    Took me for granted
    Every time I was there
    What kind of fool
    Do you play me for
    What kind of fool
    No not your fool anymore
    I do not deserve
    To be treated this way
    With such disrespect
    It is my turn to just walk away
    Leave you in your
    Lonley worl
    Shut out from the ones
    Who actually cared
    I'm walking away
    The job now is done
    The sun has set
    And you have won
    Your lonliness back

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    Worthless commented on Walking Away

    03-20-2012

    And that's The joy of having men around, they don't care....
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    poeticmike commented on Walking Away

    03-20-2012

    Its hard to accept recieving lies & pain in a relationship when all you've given was love, care & appreciation on your part. I share your pain seriously. Just remember your heart can get stabbed, shot, stepped on, even spit on....but its still beating because none of the deceits has killed it. Such a deep & beautiful write I loved it...Hope to read more of your work.....Poeticmike
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