WALKING THE FLOOR

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    WALKING THE FLOOR

    there's a hole cut out of a picture
    that's where her face use to be
    and that guy standing next to her
    that guy use to be me

    i tried to stop her from leaving
    i even got down on my knees
    i cried but she wouldn't listen
    she laughed when i said pretty please

    now all night i pace back and fourth
    i cry and talk to myself
    i keep walking the floor over her
    because i buried her under the house

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    Mercishae commented on WALKING THE FLOOR

    08-03-2009

    LMAO!! Like the ending...I have been there and am there now :) Nice write..

    therejected commented on WALKING THE FLOOR

    06-09-2009

    nice one dad, didn't expect the ending, it made me laugh. [short by 44 so this is just a filler haha]

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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