WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES

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    Something I wrote long time ago. Sometimes we women are taken to be quiet and restrained or mens toys or slaves but we can be as we please. we can be as sweet as cherry pie or as bitter as the worst sour lemon. It all depends on the man who handles us... He can one day be in Heaven with an angel of a woman or in hell another day with a devilish demonique same woman seeking revenge lol......Think about it...
    BE NICE TREAT US LIKE ROSES BE GENTLE AND LOVING TO THE WOMEN IN YOUR LIFE. OR ELSE! 

    WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES

     Women can be like red roses,

    beautiful,

    irresistible,
     
    delicate,

    as soft as petals.

    All women also have a distinguished
    but unforgettable unique scent.
    It helps us to attract slowly our victims.
    You the poor gullible men, who adore us.

    Warning: please be careful!
    Handle us lovely women with care.
    Treat us tenderly like exquisite roses
    caressing our petals with love.

    Woman can unwillingly hurt you bad
    we do as thorns on a beautiful rose,
    prick you so hard you won't forget ever,
    not to be careless handling us...


    Women can also be like hot flames,
    dangerous and very hard to tame.
    We are hot and sexy in every way
    we can burn or make you go insane
    if you don't watch what you do or say.

    Women can be red roses or hot flames
    precious, fragile yet fiery and dangerous
    we easily will dominate your nights and days
    trapping you with our beauty and fire
    then leaving you to suffer in pain
    If you are you willing to let us....

    Do you like roses and hot flames?

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    devaamido commented on WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES

    01-21-2010

    Whadaya mean: "Do you like roses and hot flames"? There's no other game in town...is there? This write is so honest, its funny: For example, I remember being able to smell estrogens from the time I was about 3, but I've found very few men or boys who remember or don't feel too embarrassed to even talk about it.
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    poett

    01/22/2010

    ha ha ha you are so funny how can that be at 3 lol you were a baby then. Anyways somehow it is true cause baby can tell when its a women or a man and most baby boys do love to be held by women....Thanks for the comment

    devaamido

    01/22/2010

    I know. Everybody laughs but it's true!

    MarionYost commented on WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES

    01-18-2010

    NICE, Well written.. Very classic and unique. And painfully true. Very good write. :) all the best -Marion-
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    WordSlinger commented on WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES

    12-18-2009

    lol, I like the last question, tricky lol, well, lets see, I love my rose, so the rose, now the flame thingy, I keep the gas can way way out of her reach, lol, Find your exquisite joy, WS
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    poett

    12/19/2009

    Thank you so much for taking time from your busy schedule... and yes I find writing to be like deep breathing to most. My way to free myself from a stressful moment turning it into joke. Life is more amusing this way... WS

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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