Warped & Twisted

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  • Dark Poetry

    Warped & Twisted
    Harsh words & violent blows
    Hidden secrets nobody knows
    Eyes are open, hands are fisted
    Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
    So may tricks & so many lies
    Too many whens & too may whys
    Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
    I'm just me, warped & twisted
    Sleeping awake & choking on a dream
    Listening loudly to a silent scream
    Call my mind, the number's unlisted
    Lost in someone so warped & twisted
    On my knees, alive but dead
    Look at the invisible blood I've bled
    I'm not gone, my mind has drifted
    Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
    Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
    Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
    The sun died out the ashes sifted
    I'm still here, warped & twisted.

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    Habibu79 commented on Warped & Twisted

    05-16-2009

    I love this...its so beautifully written
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    lonewolf commented on Warped & Twisted

    04-30-2009

    wow!, that was awesome. very nice. definate 10
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    Tornline commented on Warped & Twisted

    04-22-2009

    I am not a fan of rhyme, but this poem says alot bout teen angst. try venturing out some different forms. I suggest reading Sylvia Plath or Charles Bukowski.
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    organicchick commented on Warped & Twisted

    04-22-2009

    Excellent, excellent poem!!! It now amongst my favs. Nice flow, great rhyme! A definite 10.
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    Makai commented on Warped & Twisted

    04-22-2009

    this is so vivid, so painful, it is always better to let go of that searing pain... nice job!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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